Thursday, March 15, 2012

SA1

In the song "Love The Way You Lie" intense imagery, similar characterization and unimaginable irony are used to show even the strongest love can fade. The artist made the song so you could know what it feels like without having to experience it.

The intense imagery in the song helps you see and imagine what it was like for both of them and how their love faded. At first they say they get "warm fuzzy feelings" and "chills" when they are around each other. They are really nervous around each other when they first meet and do not want a bad first impression. Then they break off and then they are "runnin' back, again" showing that they have tried this before and are fading. Now they have a bad relationship and for the most part hate each other. The woman says "just gonna stand there and watch me burn... and hear me cry". This helps you see what it was like for the woman and shows how much he did not care and just watched her suffer physically and emotionally through their bad relationship. Also at the same time the man suffers and says "it's a steel knife in my windpipe". Showing he suffers too and for him it is like something is cutting off his ability to breath. They are also said to "spew venom in their words" when they are fighting, showing they scream intensely while they fight. There is also physical fighting too and they say they "push pull each other’s hair, scratch, claw, hit" each other when they fight. Showing how intense their relationship is in a bad way. Clearly their relationship has faded from caring what each other think and feel to the opposite and do not care at all.

These two people are essentially the same person and are not much different; to show this the author uses similar characterization. At first they are baffled by each other and "neither one knows what hit em". This shows that both of them in the beginning have the same feelings for each other and are crazy for each other. After a while they are "now in each other’s face" and are fighting a lot and are starting to lose the feelings they had for each other. They say "it's the face that's the culprit, controls you both", meaning that they only have physical attraction for each other. They are almost fully faded now and are only still together because of physical attraction. They now regret what they have done and say "I know we said things, did things that we didn't mean". That shows they both feel bad for what they did to each other while fighting and have feelings for each other. They now "fall back into the same patterns, same routine" of breaking up, getting back together and then back again. Their relationship is like a routine now and there is virtually no feeling so they have now faded a lot. They now say "your temper is just as bad as mine is, you’re the same as me" to show they are both short tempered people and they know it now. Also they say "when it comes to love you're just as blinded", and this shows they both have no idea what love is. They now realize what it is like when two bad things combine like "when a tornado meets a volcano". Their love has faded for many reasons and one would be because they are both the same bad person on the inside.

When you are in love with someone, it is unimaginable to break up with them and to fight with them, in this song that happens and it is ironic. The man asks "you ever love somebody so much you can barely breathe" and this shows that he really loves this woman. Then they are "now gettin' sick of lookin' at em", which is ironic because he loved her a lot in the beginning and now cannot stand looking at her. Yet they "swore you'd never hit em, never do nothin' to hurt em" and this is ironic because they are now hitting and fighting with each other. The woman says "that's alright because i like the way it hurts" and she "loves the way you lie" implying she is talking to the man. She is clearly sarcastically saying this and it is ironic because she used to love him and is now joking about their love and what it is based on now. Their whole relationship is now like "broken records playin' over" and there is nothing there between them now even though they started with unexplainable love but end with this. It is very ironic how they went from absolute and pure love then crashed down to pure hate for each other.

This song shows very well that even the strongest of love can fade. Through intense imagery of how it would be like and what it was like. Also the similarities in people can drive them apart and break them. Then the irony in how unimaginable it would be to actually happen.

5 comments:

  1. I like your "sexy quotes" they make reading more interesting. I also think you have a really good thesis statement. I also like your song choice. Sometimes i feel like you can get too wordy, so try and get more to the point. Finally I think u you need to work on your transitions between paragraphs, because they don't flow smoothly. I like how this is "you", when i read this in my head its like dan "douchebag" fillingim is whispering it into my ear ever so soflty.

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  2. Good job on the writing of your analysis. I liked your use of quotes thorughout the song to back up your arguments. I also liked the different points of your essay and how you backed them up. I think should have added the person that performed the song, and also introduce who "they" are. Your analysis is not very distinct, you should make it more unique.

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  3. You used a lot of good quotes this time and backed them up well. Also, you had a lot of good examples so we know what the song is about.

    You were a little redundant in certain parts and could have said more about the literary devices you used.

    You explain the peoples emotions a lot

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  4. I enjoyed reading your song analysis. You have integrated your quotes very well. I liked how much detail you had also. You explained your quotes very well. The only thing I would change is making the conclusion paragraph a little bit longer to help conclude and make everything come back together.

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  5. Your quotes are alright. Your thesis statement is written well and gets to the point. Your word variation is good as well. However, in your thesis statement, you should try to use adjectives that are more specific to your tools. And, in your body paragraphs, try not to summarize so much. A distinction I picked up on was your use of quotes; you choose strong quotes to integrate into your writing.

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